You have a nice sense of weight shift and personality in your figures. I suggest adding more of a light foreground/background to some of them depending on the situation you create - I'm left wondering what's going on in the one image that looks like a couple (the second sketch.) It looks like your sketches loosened up as you progressed through the class :]
I love the girl sitting at the desk. Especially her foot resting on the stool. It gives us a good sense of weight and flexibility. There's a good looseness in her legs, but a rigidity to her back, which tells us she's focused and tense. Keep doing what you did with her more.
Chris, Overall, well done. The comments Bethany and Colleen have made are all valid - the 2nd and 3rd pages are the strongest here - because of a strong sense of gesture, weight shift - and character. The basic indication of faces adds another level of engagement. The gesture describes the action - the face describes the motivation or state of mind. Good work.
You have a nice sense of weight shift and personality in your figures. I suggest adding more of a light foreground/background to some of them depending on the situation you create - I'm left wondering what's going on in the one image that looks like a couple (the second sketch.) It looks like your sketches loosened up as you progressed through the class :]
ReplyDeleteI love the girl sitting at the desk. Especially her foot resting on the stool. It gives us a good sense of weight and flexibility. There's a good looseness in her legs, but a rigidity to her back, which tells us she's focused and tense. Keep doing what you did with her more.
ReplyDeleteChris,
ReplyDeleteOverall, well done. The comments Bethany and Colleen have made are all valid - the 2nd and 3rd pages are the strongest here - because of a strong sense of gesture, weight shift - and character. The basic indication of faces adds another level of engagement. The gesture describes the action - the face describes the motivation or state of mind. Good work.